Lease Items That Must Be Negotiated

We the following residents of Rancho La Paz Mobile Home Park feel the newly offered lease presented by the owner of this park John Saunders are unfair, unclear, and to be financially harmful to the residents : Paragraph: 1.2,1.3,1.4,21,22.1,30.1,10.1, 11 , check charge and any blank line in lease.